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Lyrics are how a song looks somebody in the eye and says something true.
A lyric is not a poem set to music. A poem lives on the page and rewards careful re-reading. A lyric has to land in one pass, in real time, over a melody that's already moving. That's a completely different job.
The rule great lyricists never break: say something true. Not necessarily true about your literal life — true about a feeling, a moment, a moral pressure someone recognizes. Cliché is the enemy because it makes the listener stop feeling and start recognizing patterns they've heard before.
Six steps. You'll spot the difference between a cliché line and a fresh one, translate everyday feelings into lyric moves, pick the cleaner line, write four lyric lines of your own, and name what a great lyric does that a bad one doesn't.
Step 1 · Read
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Step 2 · Translate
Match each phrase to what it really is
Four phrases. Four concepts. Match each phrase to what's actually going on underneath.
The phrase
What it is
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Step 3 · Solve
Answer three at your tier
Three questions. Type your answer for each. The questions shift to match your Star Chart tier — if you haven't taken it yet, you'll get Tier 2 examples.
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Step 4 · The right next move
Pick the cleaner move for each situation
Three real situations. Two possible moves each. Pick the one that actually makes the work better.
SITUATION 01
Your verse says: "I really loved you but you left me and now I'm sad."
B is the maker's move. The original line tells the listener what to feel. B lets them feel it. The physical object (the cup) is loaded with everything the abstract statement was trying to say — and it doesn't have to say any of it directly.
SITUATION 02
You have a chorus hook: "I'm gonna break these chains and finally be free from the pain."
A is the studio move. The original hook says the same thing three times (chains / free / pain). A great hook is UNDER-written — the listener fills in the meaning. Nine of ten times, cutting the chorus in half makes it hit twice as hard.
SITUATION 03
Your last line rhymes perfectly but feels boring. It's: "So now I'll always love you true."
A is the cleaner move. Perfect rhymes at the end of songs feel too tidy — the ear expects them. Breaking the rhyme on the last line ONLY (slant, or no rhyme at all) is a classic move because it makes the last line stand out as SPOKEN, not sung. The song feels like a person, not a machine.
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Step 5 · Build your own
Now do it — for something real in your life
Apply what you just learned. Real material. Real specifics. This is where the workshop stops being reading and starts being making.
YOUR WORK
REAL FEELING
SPECIFIC IMAGE
LINE 1 (verse)
HOOK (chorus)
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Step 6 · Reflect
What does a great lyric do that a bad lyric doesn't?
One or two honest sentences. The reflection is what turns the workshop into a memory — and memory is what changes how you work next time.
The Studio · Workshop 03 · Foundation