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People don't talk in paragraphs. They interrupt, dodge, and say the second-best thing they meant.
New writers write dialogue that sounds like a school essay in quotation marks. Real people say "I dunno" and "whatever" and "can we not right now." They finish each other's sentences wrong. They avoid the thing they most need to say by talking about something else.
Great dialogue is doing at least THREE jobs at once — moving the plot, revealing character, and building tension. If your dialogue is only telling the reader information, you've written an interview. If it's doing all three, you've written a scene people remember years later.
Six steps. You'll spot the difference between real speech and school-essay speech, translate everyday exchanges into working dialogue, pick the sharper line, write a short exchange of your own, and name what makes a dialogue line stick in your head.
Step 1 · Read
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Step 2 · Translate
Match each phrase to what it really is
Four phrases. Four concepts. Match each phrase to what's actually going on underneath.
The phrase
What it is
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Step 3 · Solve
Answer three at your tier
Three questions. Type your answer for each. The questions shift to match your Star Chart tier — if you haven't taken it yet, you'll get Tier 2 examples.
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Step 4 · The right next move
Pick the cleaner move for each situation
Three real situations. Two possible moves each. Pick the one that actually makes the work better.
SITUATION 01
Your dialogue: "I am worried about my grandmother's health," said Sarah.
A is the maker's move. Real worry doesn't announce itself — it looks like a specific behavior (checking the phone) and mentions the concrete thing (Grandma didn't answer). Nobody would say "I am worried about my grandmother's health" out loud. They'd say what they said in A.
SITUATION 02
Character A: "Do you love me?" Character B: "Of course I love you."
B is the studio move. "Of course I love you" is dead — it closes the scene. B's response is alive — it dodges the question, which reveals SOMETHING is off. That answer creates a whole new set of questions for the reader. That's what dialogue is for.
SITUATION 03
Two friends are meeting for coffee after a fight. You write two pages of them apologizing to each other perfectly.
A is the editor's move. Real people can't just apologize cleanly — they avoid, misfire, deflect. The tension is the AVOIDANCE. When one of them finally says the true thing ("I was scared you were right") it lands like a hammer BECAUSE of the 4 lines of weather talk that preceded it. Give the reader the buildup.
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Step 5 · Build your own
Now do it — for something real in your life
Apply what you just learned. Real material. Real specifics. This is where the workshop stops being reading and starts being making.
YOUR WORK
TWO CHARACTERS
SETTING
SURFACE TOPIC
WRITE THE EXCHANGE
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Step 6 · Reflect
What does great dialogue do to you as a reader that bad dialogue doesn't?
One or two honest sentences. The reflection is what turns the workshop into a memory — and memory is what changes how you work next time.
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